
The plot idea of a married vampire is different, except the whole becomes nothing but cliche after cliche.ġ. The writing in terms of style and tone isn't too bad. If you were trying to help as a publisher, wouldn't you have just written the author? It's made worse because you reviewed it under your publisher's name. Being constructive is not sounding like you are doing a hit job to harm the author's sales and move your own up. If you are going to give a book one star, you should point out more than just the word "now" used twice in the description(even if it has more to do with the author than the book) you then shouldn't claim you were trying to be constructive. I don't mind a DNF review or even "why I won't be reading this" review - both of which have thier uses and are legit - but the whole thing felt like a mean spirited hit job. Honestly, I didn't even notice the whole thing about now. While I found the plot cliched, I still felt the author had enough merit to pick up another book when it was offered for free (haven't read it, though). It wasn't the greatest, but it wasn't full of errors. Update - After following a dicussion on Amazon about this author getting slammed by another author who hadn't even read past the description, I want to point out a few things - The writing wasn't bad. (Sorry.) Having said that, I enjoyed the idea of this as solely the first part of a series (Book 1 in the Vampire for Hire series.) Pretty cool in my estimation and there's are added benefits to this volume where there are extras such as an interview with the author, an interview with the main character (Samantha Moon), and other content. Odd, for me to enjoy something so overtly soap operatic, and dramatic, but there was enough mystery, horror, and police procedural story for me to sink my teeth into. In fact, he happily endeavors to make evident an affair with one of his secretaries. She's married but her husband is not exactly thrilled at being married to a vampire.

There's a gothic house, and romantic potentiality between Samantha Moon, her client, and a detective investigating the attempted murder of her client.

Yes, there's a werewolf involved (not a spoiler because it becomes apparent in the second or third chapter). Although there are some creeps here, Moon Dance is primarily a romantic mystery more along the lines of Twilight. The vampire, is a subgenre of horror that has evolved to become much more than scares.
